Daily SEO copywriting candy: Could SEO copywriting help Kitchen Kaboodle?
Earlier this year, Kitchen Kaboodle a Portland, OR upscale kitchen retailer, got some major buzz for a very amazing thing.
They decided to close their retail store three days a week, opening their doors Thursday-Sunday only.
Wow.
The co-owner, John Whistler, said that it was because of market demand. Customers wanted lower prices. Cutting expenses elsewhere wasn’t feasible. So, they closed during their slowest days.
Wow.
I’ve been chewing on this story for a long time. Stories like this upset me - there are far too many small local businesses that are suffering right now. The good news is that these folks came up with a workable solution. Closing the retail store three days a week may indeed be the perfect alternative to a recession-mindset economy.
And then I looked at their Website. And I wonder, “If their site was optimized, would that help replace the income they’re missing three days a week? If they invested a little bit of time and cash into their site, could that help take their business in a new (and profitable) direction?”
The answer is yes - and that’s very exciting.
I spent 10 minutes reviewing the site and came up with three SEO copywriting opportunities. Here are some things that Kitchen Kaboodle can try:
- Create keyphrase-rich content. The Kitchen Kaboodle product pages have very little text. Outside of how this is (most likely) limiting their conversions, the lack of keyphrase-rich content is hobbling their search engine rankings. For instance, this page sells “martini glasses” - yet there’s no content about “martini glasses” above the fold.

In fact, the only (very short) description is below the fold. 
Ecommerce sites can also look beyond their product pages, and build out unique content that they know their customers will enjoy. For instance, Sur La Table has recipies. Cookware.com features product reviews from publications like The New York Times and Ebony. Strategic content marketing allows companies to capitalize on keyphrases used at all phases of the buy cycle. This means that Kitchen Kaboodle could have articles dedicated to, say, cookware reviews - and people who are looking for cookware reviews could click through from the SERP, read the article and immediately make a purchase.
To their credit, it looks like they’ve built out unique content on some product pages, and they’ve tried to insert keyphrases (although they’re doing it in a way that’s not very effective.) This certainly helps them, but they’d have better results if they…
- …made their Titles descriptive and keyphrase-rich. Having the same Titles across the site is a huge SEO no-no that’s definitely hurting their positions. Their pages are going to have a much, much better chance of positioning if the Titles contained keyphrases and reflected the page content.

However, even if a page does position well (as this page did for “Silicone Madelaine” - a product search,) there’s nothing about the Title that provides further details or encourages click-through - especially when compared to the SERP competition:

Notice the second SERP result - it’s keyphrase rich and highly detailed. Which one would you click?
- Consider adding customer reviews. Study after study indicates that people are more apt to convert when they can read customer product reviews. That by itself is an excellent reason to build community and ask for feedback - people can read more about the cool kitchen gadget they want and buy it right away. Additionally, consumer reviews are also great for gaining new search positions (think about how many times you enter a site from a review listing on the SERP.) This would help them fill some content and keyphrase “holes” until they had a chance to expand their product content.
Is there more that Kitchen Kaboodle can do from a SEO, SEM and social media perspective ? Definitely. Certainly, if they wanted to grow their online orders, they could transform their site into a high-performing ecommerce kitchenware destination. It may not be where they want to focus their efforts or budget. After all, Kitchen Kaboodle is a “local” store, so a national focus may not be their cup of tea. At the same time, in the spirit of “controlling the controllables,” it’s always nice to know there’s another way to gain new customers.
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Daily SEO copywriting candy: Twitter your way to online writing success
March 27, 2009 • posted by Heather
It’s my 40th birthday. I’m with my favorite search buddies and eating at one of Vegas’ hottest restaurants (and most expensive…we learned THAT after getting the bill.) Drinks are flowing, food is flowing. It’s all good.
And we’re talking about Twitter. Really. On my 40th birthday. Sadly, I am not making this up.
As I’ve said before, I didn’t quite get this “Twitter thing” until Lee Odden from TopRank Marketing patiently led me through the benefits. And then I got it. And then, the SEO copywriting light turned on as I realized its networking potential.
And then I became a Twitvangelist. It happens to the best of us.
Can Twitter be a waste of time? Hell yeah. But can it be a powerful way to make contacts and even gain business? Hell yeah. For the unconverted (and I know you’re out there,) here’s some Twittips to maximize your Twit-efforts (OK, I’ll stop now.)
Won’t you follow me on Twitter? I promise not to drunk Tweet you. Really.
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February 4, 2009 • posted by Aimee
The sun is back
But it’s minus 15 degrees Celsius. Umm, BRRR! I know, it seems like I’m a tad obsessed with the daily weather, I’m not sure what that’s about. Maybe I have cabin fever! I feel the need to get out and socialize, make sure the world is still carrying on through the blizzards … so that’s today’s theme - social media - enjoy!
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How Twitter can help you brainstorm killer online writing ideas
February 3, 2009 • posted by Heather
You’ve been there. We’ve all been there.
I’ve posted about how Twitter is way cool for keeping up on conversational trends. It’s also cool for discovering new blogs, new voices and (thank goodness) brainstorming new story ideas. Here are two ways I use Twitter to generate article ideas for clients.
Haven’t tried Twitter yet? I’ll be writing a post called “Twitter for online writers” soon. Stay tuned!
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February 2, 2009 • posted by Aimee
It’s also the day after the Super Bowl 2009, so I want to touch on some of the best commercials this year (at a whopping 3M bucks for a 30 second spot, they’d better be fabulous!):
What were your favorites this year? GoDaddy.com, FedEx, Bud Light? We want to know!
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Neuromarketing and the rule of three
January 6, 2009 • posted by Heather
Guess what…that day is damn near here. Enter neuromarketing - a combination of brain science and good, old-fashioned marketing. Neuromarketing goes beyond whether people prefer Coke versus Pepsi, or whether sex sells. It delves into what sections of the brain light up like Christmas trees when we’re exposed to a brand, message or concept.
Scary, yes. But like many other things that walk that scary line…it’s kind of, well, sexy too. Suddenly, we can go beyond saying “this just works, and I can test it” and say, “this works, and here’s the science behind it.”
Case in point: The rule of three. I’ve gone on stage for over 10 years talking about how people retain things when they read or hear them in “threes.” Think of the “Conjunction Junction” song from Schoolhouse Rock “Thinking about words and phrases and clauses.” Or the special summons in the movie “Beetlejuice” (Beetlejuice, Beetlejuice, Beetlejuice!.) Or how many informercials repeat the same benefits at the beginning of a segment, in the middle, and at the end.
When I was in University, my professor told me how to write a scientific journal article: Tell them what you’re going to discuss, discuss it, and summarize the discussion. I’ve obviously never forgotten the advice.
Another study from the University of Minnesota found that “decision making is simplified when a consumer considers a third, less attractive option” (they call it decoy marketing.)
The rule of three is one of those things that are so ingrained in how we, as individuals, think that we don’t even notice the repetition. But it does help drive those benefit statements deep inside our brains.
Consider this in terms of your SEO copywriting and online content creation. How can you use the rule of three to your advantage?
Check out the article in Neuromarketing...and learn more about the buy buttons in your brain.
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January 5, 2009 • posted by Heather
Looking for some tasty online copywriting goodness? Here are my fav SEO copywriting articles that I Tweeted out to the world today. Enjoy!
And hey, if you were following me on Twitter, you would have read these articles by now! Join the SEO copywriting community here!
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Copywriting challenge: Write for 15 minutes a day
December 17, 2008 • posted by Heather
And now, it’s just you and the computer and the pressure.
It’s not like you don’t like to write. You like to write. Hell, some days you love to write. If the writing Muse just visited a tad more frequently…
Think of it this way: getting in the writing habit - whether that means blogging or creating your latest SEO copywriting masterpiece- is like getting in the exercise habit. Starting fresh is hard work. You sweat and strain and hate every moment of it. Then one day, it all clicks. You realize that you start feeling “off” if you don’t take that lunchtime Pilates class (or write your latest blog post.) And without knowing it, you’ve suddenly replaced your old habit (being a literary couch potato) to one that’s much more productive.
So, here’s your SEO copywriting challenge: Write for 15 minutes before you do anything else tomorrow and keep that habit going every business day for a solid month. Don’t check email first (checking email and the anxiety it provokes can be the biggest writer’s-block cause of all). Don’t stress about the “perfect” topic. Just write. It’s OK if all you write is “this is stupid” over and over. It’s OK to create a grocery list if nothing else comes to mind.
Just write.
Set a timer and tell yourself you can stop the second the timer buzzes. Don’t worry about form or tone or structure.
Just write.
You’ll notice three things:
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Free SEO copywriting site reviews: SEO Copywriting Snapshot
December 1, 2008 • posted by Aimee
Aimee's SEO Copywriting Snapshot
I’m very excited to announce the official launch of our SEO Copywriting Snapshots! During my six (nearly seven) years as a SEO copywriter, I’ve come to realize that one of the most common reasons so many SEO copywriting initiatives fall flat is this: you don’t know what you don’t know. As a result, it’s easy to miss opportunities for better rankings or increased conversions.
That’s where the SEO Copywriting Snapshot comes in. SEOCopywriting.com is looking for volunteers to send us their sites and let us comment on your SEO copywriting initiatives. We’ll reveal the ways you can transform your SEO copywriting from drab into fab – and uncover how to gain the highly qualified traffic (and conversions) you want.
Here’s all you have to do:
We’re going to start with Florida-based Sylvan & Sons/Genuine Dog Gear. Watch for the review this Wednesday!
Now, who wants to be next? Email me at aimee [at] seocopywriting.com now.
Cheers!
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Does your Website copy sound like a bad date?
October 1, 2008 • posted by Heather
Once upon a time, I went on a date with a boy named Mark. During the course of the date, he proceeded to tell me about his acting career (bitchin’- he was starring in his friend’s independent no-budget film, his job (he was making killer tips), his financial situation (awesome – he’s finally able to move away from home) and his abs (they were in noxious pain, dude, because he was “whalin’ on them” earlier.)
I made it through half my drink before I couldn’t take it anymore. At first, I thought it was his use of “dude” every third word. Or about how someone could spend that much time talking about his abs. Then I realized something, as narcissistic as it sounded – I could have probably overlooked a number of conversational sins if he would have done just one thing: talked less about himself, and focused more on me.
And really, deep down, don’t we want it to be all about us?
Of course we do. So why do companies insist on creating ego-driven content that doesn’t focus on the reader?
I know, I know. You didn’t mean to sound like a bad date. When you approved your corporate copy to read, “Our 50,000 square foot facility is state of the art,” you really did think that your customers would care. But think about it. Your 50,000 square foot facility provides me as much of a benefit statement as hearing about my friend’s abdominal muscles. Why would I care about your factory size when what I really care about is that you carry hard-to-find, full-warrantied parts you can ship overnight for 20 percent less than the manufacturer.
Wondering if your site does nothing but talk about your company’s coolness? Future Now has a great tool called the We We Calculator. Simply submit your URL to learn your “customer focus rate” percentage, and how many times you used “customer focus words.” If your percentage is low, you’re asked if your self-focused copy “might have an impact on your effectiveness.”
Try it. You’ll be surprised. You may be more of a bad date than you ever thought.
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